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Suffocation

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Her wings are broken,
clipped with the broken promise:
"Tomorrow will always come."

Lies weaved themselves into the walls
and are showing through the peeling wallpaper.
Written from floor to ceiling by a monstrous hand
are tallies… Counting the days
'til tomorrow.
In my 'school issued iPad', I write ramblings and such. In one of the last things I wrote, the words were "...but he doesn't seem to remember the words I wrote. I remember them. Of course I remember them. They were my feelings... my emotions... my suffocation." And I kind of looked at the word suffocation and BAM! poem. :D
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Medoriko's avatar
I love this too. I like the emotions that play through this. It's like...yeah waiting till tomorrow...and tomorrow is supposed to always come, but what if it doesn't? Great stuff once again :)