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Misguided
Alone
Losing yourself
to memories of love

If a tree falls
and there’s no one to hear it,
does it make a sound?
Kind of sort of conceptual...?
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Two aspects struck me with this poem. The fcomer was its truncated form and the latter was the reference toi the falling tree. There is a hidden metaphor in these lines, because you wrote about silent screams. Who is the tree?
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's exactly what I was going for! I'm glad you liked it!
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Professional Writer
Eureka, Michael Einstein guessed again!
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