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Oh, darling...
How am I alive?
After what you put me through,
I'm surprised I didn't
shoot myself.


Baby, love is a dangerous game,
and we played it like

Russian Roulette.
I don't usually have the title as something in the poem, but it's the best I could come up with :shrug:

Enjoy! :blowkiss:

Thank you for the comment/fave if you do so :heart:
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WordWeight Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Writer
This is one of the best things I've read on Russian Roulette. Super lovely :D
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I actually quite enjoyed the rhythm of this piece and the ending was like firecrackers. Fantastic job :thumbsup: :D

I think I know the answer but I'll say it anyway in the hopes I'm wrong: I hope you're okay :glomp:
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea what was going through my mind...so I'll just say that I wrote this on a whim XD
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, well sometimes those have a stroke of genius ;)
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well said, my friend :clap:
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SnoringFrog Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This gave me an idea, although I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it.

If you take 7 revolvers, and have one with no bullets, one with 1 bullet, one with 2, on up until you have a full gun, and then get 42 people (6 to a gun) and have them each take one pull of the trigger to the head, in the end you would have 21 people left alive, which is half of what you started with.

Not sure how I want to work that into writing, but I want to.
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
At first I thought you were being serious! Then I read the last part and I was like, "Oh, so he's not all that sadistic"
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SnoringFrog Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, yeah I would never advocate something like that irl. I'm not quite that crazy.
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Not yet, anyway XD
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SnoringFrog Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
-_-
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