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She hit the ground
before she even knew
she
       was
               falling.
I don't even know
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XxXKoyashaXxX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Writer
This is so powerful. It describes depression in a way you can never explain...thankyou for this lovely piece<3
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kelleystephens20 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
its sorta odd bc she hit the ground but then she is falling? however, I really like it it to me shows real emotion. I have moments like that too, the kind where they may not make since to others but they are very real for me. Good job
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
To give you more clarity, let me put it this way: Once my mom broke a glass cake dome, and I kneeled down to help her and got a cut on my knee. The way it relates to the poem is that I didn't know I had gotten a cut (for whatever reason) until I saw the blood. I hope that makes more sense to you ^^;
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